Ethos: How well do you build credibility, trust, and likeability with a wide audience? I believe I did cite my sources correctly and using thier crediblity to back that up. I used academic lanuage through out and used my conclusions and my sources through out to give me a strong argument.

Logos:How well does your message appeal to logic, reason, and (plenty of) evidence and support? My paper goes in a good and organized order and i believe that provided enough evidence, I think i might have made some errors using fallacies but i really tired not to.

Pathos:How well do you appeal to your audience’s emotions in an ethical way? How well do you inspire your audiences to take positive action for the wellbeing of the broader community?  In my essay i used a lot of pathos, my main ponit was to show that all the in dividuals i discussed are human just like us and they make mistakes and that if they apologize then they should be forgiven but you decide to not support them that is your descion.

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1. overly sentimental

2. death by a thousand qualifications

3. hasty generalization

4. fallacy of compostion

5. protecting the hypothesis

6. special pleading

7. false analogy

8. oversimplication

9. appeal to ignorance

10. begging the question

11. straw man

12. distroting the facts

13. fallacy of division

14. straw man

15. non sequiter

16. dogmatism

17. scare tatics

18. faulty causlity

Comma Splice-

Not correct: Her purpose was to spread awarness and to give people struggling help, I think she fullfilled that purpose as a listener.

Correct: Her purpose was to spread awarness and to give people struggling help, and i think she fullfilled that purpose as a listener.

Cyberbullying and or “Cancel Culture” is a real issue in our society, this is a big epidemic it is basically bandwagon because everyone wants to join in and fit in but everyone is going about it in the wrong ways. Of course there is a the counter arugment of cyberbulling is not going to stop and I also agree with that because everyone goes with what is popular or acceptable at the time and that is what gets people into trouble. To stop cancel culture we as a society need to bring more awarness to the issue and look at the bigger picture. This issue has ruined people’s lives, do you really want it to ruin yours?

Introductory Paragraph

The issue that this essay is talking about is if the school should have a Black Student Union on campus.

A. Thesis

No one complians about wheel chair ramps and elevator so why should we ignore rascim

Body of your argument

A. Background information

That the main reason for building the Black union center to repair damages and also the building doesn’t have wheelchair access so it is going un used.

B. Reasons or Evidence to Support Claim

Alot of people have complained about the limited acess by the disablity population

The building hasn’t gotten any renovations since 1974

The only building that wasn’t given a new heating or cooling system

1. Claim – Many black students have a difficult time forming friendships and joining organizations
2. Claim-The purposee to help black students succed on campus
3. Claim- Bringing a group of people together so they don’t feel so isolated.

Addressing the Opposite Side

It is the only building on campus with paid staff and that 540,000 dollars towards the building is too much for one building

Conclusion

Saying that blacks feel handicapped on campus and the discrimation and rasicm is at a high and that no one says anything about elevators but because they are black they don’t desrve anything nice.

Claim-The soultion to the issue is to spread awareness and don’t engage in this activity.

Grounds- This has ruined some many people’s careers and lives and it is a big issue.

Warrant-This is a moral issue that can be fixed by being better and treating everyone as we are humans and just items.

Argument-Cancel Culture

Solution- Everyone is human and makes mistakes, so if you don’t like someone just leave them alone

Emotional- Anecdotal

Lizzo a popular singer and songwriter was getting close to being “cancelled” Lizzo’s song ” Good as Hell” was on the top 5 Billboard charts and Ariana Grandes fans started a “Lizzo is over party”, saying she is only famous because of Ariana. Lizzo took to tweeter to say her piece that if she was a skinny white girl people would like her, ” you hate to see black women succeeding”. Because of Lizzo i think we should all take her as an example of cancel culture at it’s finest and we as americans need to change.

Ethical- Appeal to Authority

Barak Obama the former president of the United States, has brought fourth his opinions of cancel culture. Obama states ” being judgemental and calling people out in not enough to elict process.” if Obama said it, it must be true.