I. Exposition Thesis- Don’t take relationships for granted A. Characters- Danielle- sister, Mike-dad, Amber-Mother, Jake-brother, David-brother, Ryan-sister, and Preston-brother B. Setting- Tucson Arizona and Banner Medical Center C. Situation/Background- There was always something different about my sister Danielle but we never knew that she was deathly sick. It my and my family’s lives forever. II. …
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Hw 9/9/10
My sisters death- My sister Danielle had cardiac health problems and she passed away about six months ago. This made me who I am today and completely changed my way of thinking and to not take relationships for granted. My cousin’s suicide- My cousin Drake was a troubled teenager and made some mistake. As punishment …
In Class Writing 10/8/19 Part Two
I have come to believe to question everything and not always to believe what you have been told, even if it is someone in a higher postion than you. I am standing here as a loved one and a sister that still doesn’t have their life figured out and still doesn’t understand why certain things …
In Class Writing 10/8/19 Part One
I have never had to write a rhetorical analysis before, so this new for me and taught me a new way of writing. I learned how to find the deeper meanings of songs because before I would just listen to a song but now I as a listener can trully understand the symbolizim. I used …
Final Draft Essay 1
Rhetorical Analysis of Gabbie Hanna’s Song “Medicate” American youtuber, author, actress and singer/songwriter Gabbie Hanna in her song ‘’Medicate’’ (February 1, 2019) addresses the topics of chronic depression and other mental illnesses. She argues that doctors are killing “sadness with science.” She supports this claim by stating that doctors don’t disclose the side effects of …
In Class Writing 10/2/19
Grammar Guide Sentences/Complete Sentences/Independent Clauses- Subject-verb“complete thought” Fragments-incomplete sentence that lacks a subject, a verb and or is a dependent clause. Run ons- Fused sentence comma splice. EX.to fix add a comma and FANBOYS, add a period, or use a semicolon Comma to separate time words Use a comma between day of week and the month Use …
In Class Writing 10/1/19
A lot of Hanna’s audience are teenagers and in America about fifty percent of teenagers by the age of forteen have a mental illness. Hanna’s platform on Youtube has over two million subscribers; furthermore, she has a big impact on American teenagers. She is using her influence for good and is letting her listeners feel …
Hw 9/25/19
Rhetorical Analysis of Gabbie Hanna’s Song ‘’Medicate’’ American youtuber, author, actress and singer/songwriter Gabbie Hanna in her song ‘’Medicate’’ (February 1, 2019) addresses the topics of chronic depression and other mental illnesses. She argues that doctors are ‘’killing sadness with science.’’ She supports this claim by stating that doctors don’t disclose the side effects for …
In Class Writing 9/25/19
Thesis-I will analyze her use of vivid descriptions, personal anecdotes, and emotionally loaded language to persuade her audience. Topic Sentence One-Hanna’s use of vivid descriptions helps support her argument that medication is not the only way to fix your problems. By sharing her own experiences with medication, she is showing how it gives her feel …
Rough Draft Essay One
Medicate American youtuber, author, actress and singer/songwriter Gabbie Hanna in her song ‘’Medicate’’ (February 1, 2019) addresses the topics of chronic depression and other mental illnesses. She argues that doctors are ‘’killing sadness with science.’’ She supports this claim by stating that doctors don’t disclose the side effects for these heavy drugs and tell their …
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